I slid into the darkest and most tender hours...anxiously...
alone amidst the subtle ghosts and...
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I slid into the darkest and most tender hours...anxiously...
alone amidst the subtle ghosts and my imagination at play...
voices of immortal bards consoling me...
chattering on, crooning into the deepest hours of my contentment...
washing away the heavy yoke of living, the burdens of challenge..
seeing life thru someone else's eyes...
I feel good today...lost in some other world...
for a few solitary hours I am lifted into an ivory tower...
a sanctuary, with walls of snowy white prose...
now dawn comes... and brings along duty with it....
rest, repair, restore myself for trials to come....
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Thanks suveer :)
Keep coming!
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Hello
its beautiful!
regards
SUVEER
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Thanks for such a lovely comment Premsaran....Keep coming :)
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I wish...
Thanks for ur visit BL....keep coming!
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Ya Dsampath ji, u r absolutely right...a renewal is always required before an adventure...I am fine till now...yet to undergo the trial u are talkin abt :) I was actually planning to write down a note to u...will do it soon... :)
Thanks for the visit!
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Saranya,
Dawn brings the duty first..........whyen feeling good enjoy the time,........ I liked all the lines.. the following lines i liked........
..I feel good today...lost in some other world...
for a few solitary hours I am lifted into an ivory tower
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Aha !!! Now that was very deep ... yet so simple ...

rest, repair, restore myself for trials to come....
U kno everything's gonna b alright ... !~!!!
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dear saranya,
renewal
is required before
an adventure
or a trial..
all the best..
how are you?
and your health??
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