Namita, such a beautiful and lovely comment...
Well...yes, u got it...the second last para shows how helpless the girl is...
What an imagination I mut say....even I felt, after goin thru ur comment,  that if the girl turns her face, it'll be the face of my profile pic... :)
Well...glad to have ur comment...keep coming!!!

Premsaran, thanks for the lovely comment :)
Ya, you can say that the picture inspired me to write...but when I started writing, I forgot the picture and just wrote whatever came to my mind and what I feel always... :)
Well, great to see u on my blog space...keep coming!!!

Hi Viv, so sweet  of you to comment on my post...Keep visiting!

Hi kalpita, thanks for comin to my blog...and for the comment also...:)
Keep visiting!!!

sarnya .....very honestly expressed lines .the empact of emotions makes heart heavy ,not only with sadness but with helplessness as well .

the second last stanza.....the little girl fighting to control the hurt .....how i want to cuddle her in my arms .

why i feel that if the girl in pic will turn her face ,it will merge into your profilr photo .


namita

Saranya Patel,

wonderful imagination and sensitive emotions. Did the picture  inspire the poem or the  poem directed the photograph.  It is  picture perfect roll of words.......... nice one.....following lines  i loved.

 when I decide to close my door for you
you knock on it in the silence of my lonliness
then I forget everything except you...

Saranya,

Very good piece, love the way you expressed yourself.  The emotions came flooding off the page and being an old romantic... I loved it.  Keep writing.

Regards, Viv

Dear Sarnya,
                        Beautiful expressions--expressed beautifully---accompanied by nice photoes
regards n luv,
Kalpita

Lalima ji, thanks for the visit :)
Its all my pleasure to have your comment on my post!
Went thru ur profile n got to know that u r also from Pune...nice to know someone on sulekha from the same city... :)
Keep visiting!!!

 i don't know how i reached here...sheer luck. Just loved your writing.made my day.lalima