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  May 28 2008  | Views 212 |  Comments  (15)
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  namitasachan posted 2 mnths ago

saranya

nupur ka tahe dil se shukragujar hai ham .kitna pyara likh leti ho tum hindi me bhi .shabd ,pravah ,bhav .........khoobsoorat

keep it up dear

namita



  Saranya Patel posted 2 mnths ago

Oh so nice of you shootradhar...u made my day by giving such a b'ful comment on my post :)

Thanks a ton for the visit...keep coming and do give ur b'ful comments on my posts!



  shootradhar posted 3 mnths ago

Hi Saranya....
...Main aap ki yah pahli hi rachna dekh raha hoon sulekha par wo bhi Nupur ke comment page par aap ka naam dekhne ke baad ...!
  Aap ki rachna ek asha jagati hai ki agar log hindi main likhe tao bahut hi sundar likh saqte hain...aap ki rachna hur maayne main ke sampoorn rachna hai..!

Ek khoobsoorat Rachna ke liye Badhai...!

Likhti Rahiye !

Shootradhaar !



  Saranya Patel posted 3 mnths ago

Shani, gud comment...though negative ;-)
Keep visiting...



  Shani Ajmera posted 3 mnths ago

Chupa Dunga Main Aasmaan Ko Jahaan Se Sooraj Nikalta Hai,
Dekhega Chanda Wahan Se Mere Mann Se Phir Kya Nikalta Hai,,
Bas Tanhaai Main Basi Kuch Baatein Chupi Hogi,
Us Behte Dariye Se Koi Aansoo Nikalta Hai.

Hun Main Insaa Bas Kuch Aise Kaam Hai,
Jalti Hai Kabhi Bujhti Rooh Meri,
Andar Se Rooh Heraan Hai,
Darta Hun Khud Ke Kho Jaane Se,
Ab Yahi Aalam Nikalta Hai.

Dekhta Hun Ab Yahan Kabb Kabhu Sooraj Nikalta Hai..

Shani
shani_writes@rediffmail.com



  Saranya Patel posted 3 mnths ago

Thanks Nup di...wow...b'ful lines...
Glad that u liked it... :)



  keyaa1 posted 3 mnths ago

Saranya

First I am sorry Iam late here. Was busy with guests.

Am touched and overwhelmes such a wonderful poem nd that too dedicated to me. Wow thaks a ton.

I always was so sure that you would write very well in Hindi...and I am always right except for when I am wrong...

This poem

Us gagan ko deho jahan suraj roz aata hai
us raat ko dekho jaha chanda chamkata hai
us sagar ko deho jo nitant akela hai aur phir bhi hai magan
us nadi ko dekho jo paati hai sagar ki raah

phir me kya hoon
tumhari hi jyoti nanhi si
jab tum mere hi andar ho
to muze tum se kya dar

hope you like my lines

look forward to reading more poems in Hindi from you.

Nupur



  Saranya Patel posted 3 mnths ago

Oh yash ji, Thanks a lot for coming...u know what...I always feel so obliged when u comment on my blogs...n it happens rarely...

So, u coming on anyone's blog and commenting is somethin like its already proved that its a nice blog :)

Thanks once again...I am so glad that u liked the poem....happy to have ur b'ful comment! Keep coming :)



  Saranya Patel posted 3 mnths ago

Writer at heart, thanks for such a lovely comment....I am glad that u liked the poem...Keep visiting :)



  Saranya Patel posted 3 mnths ago

WL, so many thanks for goin thru the post...keep coming :)





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